Wednesday, November 5, 2008

Winning Speach & Losing Speech

Winning Speach



I would first like to say thank you to all of my supporters for voting for me and wanting change, wanting a better life in America. John McCain of course fought a very good speech against me. I hold no grudge against him. It was time were I thought I wouldn't win. It was times when it was hard with money and with the campaign. As soon as I step my foot into that white house I will bring our troops home, lower these taxes and make the United States a better place. Joe Biden, I would like to thank you for supporting me and for helping me win this vigorous battle. I am happy that I went through this with my family, they and everybody who voted for me are the reason I am here today, so thank. When I said all those promises trust me they will be fulfeild.






Losing Speech








Even though I am disappointed at losing I am very happy on this historical day. Barack Obama you have made history on this very day. Unlike me you have succeeded. I failed this country, everybody now support Obama because he is your new president of the United States. I am not mad so you shouldn't be mad. I hope that he fulfill all of his promises that he has made. I hope he serves you right. If he needs my help with anything I will be their to help him. I again apologize for failing you, but thank you very much for supporting me at everything.

4 comments:

Zero465 said...

You can improve this speech by adding how you can do better.

panthers12 said...

good job, you sound just like obama. now you need to write how are you will inprove if you lose.

da best in da game said...

i think you should be a little more explantory on how tankful you are and give it spirit. add some explamation points or some thing

josecruz said...

I think you should try to explain more about how you will do better and how you think you can do better for next time.